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hello,
this is my first composition that i have ever kept...it may sound very odd, and rushed together, but it should sound like a paniced or confused guitarist/ instrumentalist.
It might also soudn out of time completely, but it is meant to give that impression (apart from one slight error i found later, which im trying to fix right now...)
anyway, i hope you enjoy this, the title came fro what my friend said after hearing it...but dont worry, its not got any extreme high pitches, or white noise effects etc.

Here it is:
http://media.putfile.com/Bleeding-Lugs

Please give losts of feedback, even if it is very frank, and blunt..(for example, the music you ,make it just a pile of shitty jumbled noise.....as long as you give a reason)
thank you
Kokuya

PS: for those who dont know, your lug, is you ear, its a scottish word.

Backmasking can suffer from being too obvious. Maybe add some backgrounds to this piece. Something going on in another pitch. Or reverse what you have and add some blips and blaps between the peaks -- it sounds pretty good unreversed... or reversed, whichever is the opposite of what it is. It needs some sort of juxtaposition around it, to give it context or contrast or something like that.

thanks, that reaklly heklps, since it was pretty much one of my first ones ever then i didnt really know much about what goes well etc, and how to improve it.
thanks a lot.